Jobbsøknad, Inder søker arbeid i Norge

[Enceladus]

Oppgaven er å skrive en arbeidsøknad der jeg er en Indisk person som søker jobb i Norge. Jeg har skrevet dette utkastet. Noen som gidder å se igjennom det og komme med litt konstruktiv kritikk og rette på skrivefeil og formuleringer osv.

 

Jeg følger dette oppsettet:

http://access-international.cappelen.no/c6...html?tid=142023

 

Takker mye for hjelp

 

 

 

Raja Rammohan

New Delhi, India

12 Aurangzeb Road

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------22 of January 2008

Ola International AS

Oslo, Norway

Nedre Vollgate 12

 

Dear Sir Ola Nordmann I wish to apply for the job as an IT worker in your company.

I found the advertisement in the local newspaper New Delhi Times, 20 of January 2008

 

This job will serve as an great experience in my career boosting my skills to new hights.

 

The job is what i have been studing my hole life for and are also one of my dearest personal hobbies. My work experience is exceptional (see references) since I have been working 2 years as an IT/Computer problem solver for the Dell Company.

 

My interests include IT and troubleshooting old computers, I also have a great interest in traveling and sports, playing a short period for the New Delhi National Landhockey League (see references) and because of that also been travelig some across the country. I am an 25 year old and trives in all kind of social situations, always eager to learn and spreading my good mood to everybody.

 

I can refer to my previous manager at the Dell company Bagha Jatin and my coach of New Delhi National Landhockey League Jawaharlal Nehru

 

To Contact me use the Telefhone 91-11-23341234, Fax 91-11-23344542 or my e-mail [email protected]

 

I can begin to work anytime after the 25 of February, And I will be happy attending an interview with your company.

 

Yours sincerely,

Raja Rammohan

Endret 22. januar 2008 av Mr. Gnom

[Ekko]

Tar bare raskt noen skrivefeil jeg ser. Og litt streker over ting jeg ikke ville hatt med.

 

Raja Rammohan

New Delhi, India

12 Aurangzeb Road

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------22 of January 2008

Ola International AS

Oslo, Norway

Nedre Vollgate 12

 

Dear Sir Ola Nordmann. I wish to apply for the job as an IT worker in your company.

I found the advertisement in the local newspaper New Delhi Times, 20 of January 2008

 

This job will serve as an great experience in my career, boosting my skills to new heights.

 

The job is what I have been studying for my whole life and is also one of my dearest personal hobbies. My work experience is exceptional (see references) since I have been working 2 years as an IT/Computer problem solver for the Dell Company.

 

My interests include IT and troubleshooting old computers. I also have a great interest in traveling and sports, playing a short period for the New Delhi National Landhockey League (see references). and bBecause of that I have also been travelig some aroundthe country. I am an 25 years old and thrives in all kinds of social situations, always eager to learn and spreading my good mood to everybody.

 

I can refer to my previous manager at the Dell company, Bagha Jatin and my coach of New Delhi National Landhockey League, Jawaharlal Nehru

 

To Contact me use the Telephone 91-11-23341234, Fax 91-11-23344542 or my e-mail [email protected]

 

I can begin to work anytime after the 25 of February, and I will be gladly attending an interview at your company.

 

Yours sincerely,

Raja Rammohan

 

 

Det er en del ting til jeg ville gjort anneledes, men blir bare en overfladisk retting for det meste. Jeg har ikke slått opp ordene jeg har rettet, så det får du gjøre for å sikre at jeg ikke ahr gjort noe feil.

Endret 23. januar 2008 av Ekko

[Enceladus]

Ok, takker så mye Jeg får ta den et steg videre.

 

Er ikke helt fornøyd med alt selv heller så.

 

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