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En dårlig engelsk-historie jeg har skrevet o_o: Guy Fawkes

 

Guy Fawkes was a man who planned a plot with he`s friends. They wanted to kill King Jacob. They took some gunpowder barrels and put it under Houses of Parliament. Guy guarded the barrels. When he waited (he probaly had to take suicide when the barrels exploded, but it didn`t exploded), some guards take that guy Guy to a prison. He said the name on he`s "friends", and got hanged. The End.

Hvilken klasse går du i?

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En dårlig engelsk-historie jeg har skrevet o_o: Guy Fawkes

 

Guy Fawkes was a man who planned a plot with he`s friends. They wanted to kill King Jacob. They took some gunpowder barrels and put it under Houses of Parliament. Guy guarded the barrels. When he waited (he probaly had to take suicide when the barrels exploded, but it didn`t exploded), some guards take that guy Guy to a prison. He said the name on he`s "friends", and got hanged. The End.

Ja, den var dårlig :green:

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En dårlig engelsk-historie jeg har skrevet o_o: Guy Fawkes

 

Guy Fawkes was a man who planned a plot with he`s friends. They wanted to kill King Jacob. They took some gunpowder barrels and put it under Houses of Parliament. Guy guarded the barrels. When he waited (he probaly had to take suicide when the barrels exploded, but it didn`t exploded), some guards take that guy Guy to a prison. He said the name on he`s "friends", and got hanged. The End.

Du har skrevet "he`s" mange steder i stedet for "his". Og det burde være "but it didn't explode" i stedet for "but it din't exploded". :)

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En dårlig engelsk-historie jeg har skrevet o_o: Guy Fawkes

 

Guy Fawkes was a man who planned a plot with he`s friends. They wanted to kill King Jacob. They took some gunpowder barrels and put it under Houses of Parliament. Guy guarded the barrels. When he waited (he probaly had to take suicide when the barrels exploded, but it didn`t exploded), some guards take that guy Guy to a prison. He said the name on he`s "friends", and got hanged. The End.

Du har skrevet "he`s" mange steder i stedet for "his". Og det burde være "but it didn't explode" i stedet for "but it din't exploded". :)

Takk. ^^ *rette opp*

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En dårlig engelsk-historie jeg har skrevet o_o: Guy Fawkes

 

Guy Fawkes was a man who planned a plot with he`s friends. They wanted to kill King Jacob. They took some gunpowder barrels and put it under Houses of Parliament. Guy guarded the barrels. When he waited (he probaly had to take suicide when the barrels exploded, but it didn`t exploded), some guards take that guy Guy to a prison. He said the name on he`s "friends", and got hanged. The End.

Du har skrevet "he`s" mange steder i stedet for "his". Og det burde være "but it didn't explode" i stedet for "but it din't exploded". :)

Takk. ^^ *rette opp*

Ja, det er sikkert mer som jeg ikke la merke til, altså. :grin:

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En dårlig engelsk-historie jeg har skrevet o_o: Guy Fawkes

 

Guy Fawkes was a man who planned a plot with he`s friends. They wanted to kill King Jacob. They took some gunpowder barrels and put it under Houses of Parliament. Guy guarded the barrels. When he waited (he probaly had to take suicide when the barrels exploded, but it didn`t exploded), some guards take that guy Guy to a prison. He said the name on he`s "friends", and got hanged. The End.

 

 

How I writed English?

 

Mange eminente formuleringer og kreative grammatiske løsninger her.

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En dårlig engelsk-historie jeg har skrevet o_o: Guy Fawkes

 

Guy Fawkes was a man who planned a plot with he`s friends. They wanted to kill King Jacob. They took some gunpowder barrels and put it under Houses of Parliament. Guy guarded the barrels. When he waited (he probaly had to take suicide when the barrels exploded, but it didn`t exploded), some guards take that guy Guy to a prison. He said the name on he`s "friends", and got hanged. The End.

 

 

How I writed English?

 

Mange eminente formuleringer og kreative grammatiske løsninger her.

Jeg er tydeligvis ganske dårlig i norsk også, siden jeg ikke helt skjønte det du skrev. O_o :p

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