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Så, jeg vil da dele teksten min med dere, og høre hva dere syns, gjerne gi en karakter også :p

 

Så, i skjultag it comes!

 

Growing up with expectations

(assignment nr. 6)

 

Most children have parents. And like every parent, they have expectations for their little one. Like when you've had a verb test and you are pretty pleased with yourself by getting almost all the damn words right, except one. Then when you come home, they see that little error you did by writing “a chir” instead of

“a chair”, and their heads just totally snap! And they say like: “Dude, you have one word wrong, man, that simple word?! YOU FAILED son!” I just don't get it, what on earth is wrong with them? I got one simple word wrong, OK, so what? The earth don't start an eternal spin, then implodes and kills everyone in the universe for that, but it seems like it does in their head though. Or maybe it's their head that does that. I sure hope so, but who knows, because all they think about is those stupid grades. I should have done that to, and sometimes I do. And like I said, the world don't implode and turns into a mass murdering machine if I get a B+ instead of an A like I did this time, and the teachers know I can do when I want to, but that's the problem. I don't know when I want. Or, I do know but it's just the thing to actually do it, that is the biggest problem. So I want to get good grades all the time, I just cant concentrate enough to make it happen in the real world. My dream isn't exactly to stand to Bill Gates' right, and I don't want do go to the outer space either. All I want is to live a normal life, with a wife that I love, one green Audi, a dog, seven pairs of socks, nine shirts, five jeans and two children. Oh, and don't forget the cat! But at the same time, I don't want to live like a normal family in a city or something, I want to do some things that are different, that family's usually don't do. Like living on a boat, or build a house on the water, but I wonder how my parents felt when their parents topped up their tiny little head with expectations, rules and all that shit. And after the stories they have told from the time they were young, it was even worse than it is

now, first I didn't think that was possible, but at least I'm glad my teacher don't torture our minds by flying around with a ruler, making us believe they smack our fingers with it when we don't do as they say, or just don't know what we are doing at all, witch happen fairly often these days, although I'm sure that I'm not alone in this world, I seems like almost all parents have big expectations for their children, and I see why. They want then to grow up well and healthy, get a nice job, a beautiful wife. And most of all they want to get some grandchildren to play with and spend money on. I don't see the problem in that, I want grandchildren too. That is hopefully a couple of years from now on though, and I will hopefully be sitting in a nice little chair with a little remote in my hand, and have no worries, no expectations, just relax and maybe have a little to drink to my coffee instead of worrying about those stupid grades.

 

 

Gjerne copy/paste deres historie også, hvis dere har den :)

 

Sterk 5. Litt for mye muntlig struktur visse steder synes jeg. Men en bra skrevet tekst! :thumbup:

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Det er ikke noe stort, men ord som "Like" brukt i begynnelsen av en setning/avsnitt får den til å høres muntlig ut. Men dette er enkelt å luke ut fordi jeg tror at du ikke gjør det bevisst men kansje fordi du ikke har grunnlaget for å artikulere deg på noen annen måte ;)

 

Ikke ta kommentaren min for alvorlig selfølgelig, jeg har ingen ide om hvordan oppgaven skulle besvares. Men igjen kan jeg si at du skriver god engelsk! Håper den går bra! :yes:

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