Muntlig Eksamen 10.klasse - Engelsk

[Martin.F]

Hei,

 

trenger litt hjelp. Har da som sagt kommet opp i engelsk muntlig,

og jeg trakk oppgave 6: A beautiful world - for how long?

 

Så, lurer da litt på hva jeg burde skrive om. Har tenkt litt på CO2 utslipp og slikt,

og kanskje global oppvarming. Men er det noen som kan komme med noe litt konkret?

Eller noen som har trukket samme oppgave som kan gi meg noen ideer?

 

Takk på forhånd,

Martin

Endret 13. juni 2007 av Martin AF

[Guttorm190E]

Jeg var akkurat oppe i engelsk muntlig (2. klasse).

 

Ja, si lit om utslipp og klimaproblemene. Hva man kan gjøre for å senke utslipp osv.

 

PÅ fremføringen fikk jeg sterkt pluss for at jeg kunne mye om stoffet jeg hadde om. Så les mye og sett deg godt inn i stoffet. Bruk bilder, figurer eller statistikker.

 

Lykke til!

[Martin.F]

Takk for tips! Settes stor pris på! ^^

[Martin.F]

Sorry for bumping, men trenger litt flere tips står litt fast her!

Jeg vet det er en hel del å skrive om, men kommer ikke på noe bra greier i farta!

 

Her er det jeg har skrevet så langt. Mangler nesten 1000 ord, så trenger virkelig litt hjelp. Du synes kanskje at måten jeg skriver på er litt spesiell, men det er min måte å gjøre det på, tar det som en artig treningssak :!: Og den er langt ifra ferdig! Dette er nærmest en kladd

 

Klikk for å se/fjerne innholdet nedenfor

Pollution appears in many different ways, and there are many types of pollution. Like air pollution: acid rain, smog. We have water pollution, like oil spill, and of course visual pollution, which can refer to the presence of overhead power lines, motorway billboards, and open storage of trash. Is this ok? No, of course it isn’t ok.

 

Visual pollution is probably the type of pollution humans need to get rid off. It's an unnecessary and ignorant thing to do. People just throw away their garbage just because they don't take their time to locate a trashcan. They just don't see the connection between their own actions and the world's increasing environmental problem. How can we reduce the pollution?

 

Here in Norway we don’t have much of CO2, but what we do have is oil. If we hear about an oil spill in the North Sea, it is most likely us, the Norwegians. If we could find other ways to make money, and leave the oil to our descendants, those incidents might have been avoided.

 

We are encouraged to travel less with airplanes, this because the plane leaves an enormous amount of Carbon dioxide in the air. The CO2 would rather want to fall down to the ground, but when it’s at that height, it’s easier to “fly” upward, and this may cause big damage to our ozone layer. To put it in other words: The damage rate is higher with a plane in the air than with a cow that farts on the ground. Point well-taken? Good!

 

Well, instead of flying to the southern countries, or wherever you’re going, you can always drive. The car in your garage is made for you to use it. If you don’t have a car, you can always take the bus. Personally, I will ask you to use public transport, yes, like a bus. Imagine if all thirty people on that bus drove their own car! That would’ve polluted thirty times more than that bus. Just, by all means: do not fly. The carbon dioxide spillage is way too high to ignore. Please, take this into consideration. Thank you!

 

Håper noen gidder å lese gjennom og gi meg noen tips til hvordan jeg kan fortsette, eventuelt hva jeg kan endre på!

 

Takker og bukker for alle svar!

 

Martin

 

Eh, engelsken er langt ifra perfekt, og skal gjøres om en del

[Martin-sama]

Så bra ut det utkastet her!

 

Nå har jeg aldri vært oppe i engelsk, så det er nok mange her som gi deg mye bedre tips enn meg selv.

 

Men jeg ville sett den Al Gore filmen: "An Inconvenient truth", skal visst være ganske bra

 

Det som jeg tror er viktig er å dra inn dine egne meninger om dette temaet i forhold til dagens situasjon (global oppvarming og slikt )

 

Men som sagt, sikkert noen som gi langt bedre tips enn meg

 

-

Martin

[.Marcus]

Sorry for bumping, men trenger litt flere tips står litt fast her!

Jeg vet det er en hel del å skrive om, men kommer ikke på noe bra greier i farta!

 

Her er det jeg har skrevet så langt. Mangler nesten 1000 ord, så trenger virkelig litt hjelp. Du synes kanskje at måten jeg skriver på er litt spesiell, men det er min måte å gjøre det på, tar det som en artig treningssak  :!:  Og den er langt ifra ferdig! Dette er nærmest en kladd

 

Klikk for å se/fjerne innholdet nedenfor

Pollution appears in many different ways, and there are many types of pollution. Like air pollution: acid rain, smog. We have water pollution, like oil spill, and of course visual pollution, which can refer to the presence of overhead power lines, motorway billboards, and open storage of trash. Is this ok? No, of course it's not.

 

Visual pollution is probably the type of pollution humans need to get rid off. It's an unnecessary and ignorant thing to do. People just throw away their garbage just because they don't take their time to locate a trashcan. They just don't see the connection between their own actions and the world's increasing environmental problem. How can we reduce the pollution?

 

Here in Norway we don’t have much of CO2, but what we do have is oil. If we hear about an oil spill in the North Sea, it is most likely us, the Norwegians. If we could find other ways to make money, and leave the oil to our descendants, those incidents might have been avoided.

 

We are encouraged to travel less with airplanes, this because the plane leaves an enormous amount of Carbon dioxide in the air. The CO2 would rather want to fall down to the ground, but when it’s at that height, it’s easier to “fly” upward, and this may cause big damage to our ozone layer. To put it in other words: The damage rate is higher with a plane in the air than with a cow that farts on the ground. Point well-taken? Good!

 

Well, instead of flying to the southern countries, or wherever you’re going, you can always drive. The car in your garage is made for you to use it. If you don’t have a car, you can always take the bus. Personally, I will ask you to use public transport, yes, like a bus. Imagine if all thirty people on that bus drove their own car! That would’ve polluted thirty times more than that bus. Just, by all means: do not fly. The carbon dioxide spillage is way too high to ignore. Please, take this into consideration. Thank you!

 

Håper noen gidder å lese gjennom og gi meg noen tips til hvordan jeg kan fortsette, eventuelt hva jeg kan endre på!

 

Takker og bukker for alle svar!

 

Martin 

 

Eh, engelsken er langt ifra perfekt, og skal gjøres om en del 

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Kan jo forsåvidt svare på engelsk

 

You say there's not a lot of CO2 in Norway, just oil. Oil is hydrocarbons, like gasoline and diesel. When said substances are burnt, they will release CO2 into the atmosphere, and I don't believe it'll just drop dead on the ground because it's a gas. If it did, you and me wouldn't be alive, as we can't utilize the oxygen when it's coupled up with a carbon atom.

 

Also, CO2 is not our only enemy in this "battle", other greenhouse gases like methane are also threatening. There's not as much methane as there is CO2 in the atmosphere by far, but methane blowouts are dangerous. Down at the sea floor, you'll find methane compressed 140-ish times, if you're unlucky and shove a drill down in the reserves, you'll release a whole lot of methane, which is a lot more effective as a greenhouse gas compared to CO2.

 

Let's not forget one of the other dangerous greenhouse gases. You'll know it as hydrogendioxide, H2O. As it gets warmer, more water will evaporate and shut electromagnetic heat inside the atmosphere, which again leads to more and more evaporation. H2O is also an effective greenhouse gas, and has great potential in a chain reaction.

 

Leaving the oil to our descendants isn't the worst idea I've ever heard, but it's not the best either. What we should do is to push for more effective sources of power, and use oil for what it's really good for - making recycleable products like plastics, clothes (e.g. fleece) and other consumer products. You're also blaming Norway alone a bit too much for this whole beefed up "the-global-temperature-is-rising-and-we're-all-going-to-die" plot. I highly doubt we're the only ones adding to the problem.

 

You need to add more depth, again - CO2 isn't the only culprit, it's just one of many reasons the global average temperature is rising slightly. Widen your horizons, and don't blame people for travelling by plane. For example - my own father has to travel several times weekly to other cities in Norway because of his job. Driving would be out of the question, it easily adds up to 6 hours of driving for less then an hour of flying. You could try to promote trains however, but trains would be more feasible to use in a more flat country like England or Denmark. We've got a whole lot of mountains in Norway which means making effective railways is much much harder.

 

You should also work on the composition of your sentences. Some of them seems to be a bit too artificial (Les: fornorsket) and wouldn't make the best impression. Watch your use of "off" and "of", easy to make mistakes.

 

Good luck on your oral exam, make sure to practice your pronunciation to win the "crowd"

[phonk]

husk at co2 ikke er en farlig gass! tross alt det du puster ut!

og vet ikke om jeg har rett her, men jeg tror alle klimagasser regnes om til co2.... om du slipper ut 1tonn metangass så regnes det om (vet ikke hvordan) til tilsvarende mengde co2. for co2 er tross alt ikke den værste klimagassen!! om du søker etter "the great global warming swindle" på youtube eller google video og ser den lærer du mye om co2, men ikke se deg blind på den heller!! for den snakker kun om co2, og som sagt når en snakker om klimakvoter og antall tonn, tror jeg alt regnes om til co2

 

lykke til!!

[Samegerilja]

Hvis noen av dere har følgt med på nyhetene i det siste. Har det vært oppslag om at kuer slipper uhorvelig mye metangass som bidrar. Vi kan ikke "slakte" alle kuene, men vi kan spise mindre kjøtt så vi ikke trenger så mange kuer

 

Samtidig er det viktig at Norge som en oljenasjon tar grepene ute på oljerigg-feltene, der man brenner opp "overskuddet" og bidrar til utslippene. Dette gjør de 365 dager i året.

[Martin.F]

Tusen takk for alle svar, men fikk nok ikke brukt noe av det De kom litt sent!

 

Men, har nå vært oppe, snakket i ca 15 minutter, skulle egentlig snakket i 25 da men

 

Da jeg kom inn igjen for å få karakteren spurte de meg om hvordan jeg synes det gikk, og jeg svarte: "Gikk helt greit.."

"Helt greit?"

"Ja, kunne sikkert gjort det bedre men..."

"Hadde du forventet en 8'er du da eller?!"

 

Hahah, de sa det var synd de ikke kunne gi meg bedre enn 6, så, den endelige karakteren ble en 6'er med sløyfe og stjerne på! ^^

 

Ja, er ganske fornøyd!

Endret 15. juni 2007 av Martin AF

[-Tommy]

Gratulerer

[.Marcus]

Kanonbra det da!

 

Læreren min i Engelsk VG1 drog med ut på gangen for å spørre meg hvorfor jeg var så elendig i fransk når jeg hadde skrevet en såpass bra Engelsk tentamen at hun måtte kopiere den opp og bruke den som eksempel til neste årskull. Fikk 6 i engelsk standpunkt, men hun var ikke fornøyd med skalaen som til nøds skulle gått litt høyere opp.

 

Forventer noe lignende av deg til neste år med en slik muntlig eksamen

[Martin.F]

Hahaha !

 

Hjertelig takk, og GOD SOMMER!

[Samegerilja]

Gratttiz Martin AF ;P

[Martin.F]

Takker og bukker!