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I think this topic (and the idea of an English sub-forum) is great. Even though I'm not as active here on the forum (in general) as I would like to, I read quite a lot and I will try to be active in this thread from now on. I've seen a clear decline in my "everyday English" as well as my more advanced vocabulary in later years, probably (or pretty much guaranteed :p) because I've quit almost all sort of games, for instance online playing game which got me a lot of English speaking friends on MSN, I read on international discussion boards etc. The only "maintenance" I have left is five lessons a week at school and English speaking TV series (without subtitles).

 

Btw, I appreciate if people disregard the forum rules about correcting other people's spelling (with regards to me, of course) in this thread. Correcting => improvement, and so I appreciate feedback on my language. ;)

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Ok, I have now read your text. You get good into the parts Fair - Unfair and .Friends - Enemies Don't see the past - present so good, ( can you tell that please) but I do not know. I liked the text, it's good written english. You have some grammer mistakes, and some words typed wrong. Leave instead of left for example. There are some lines I would have rewritten but that's just the way I write. Would say you got good fantasy, but since it's taken from a movie, I can't say that, but I guess that your teacher does not know that.

If you want me to say more just let me know.

Tell me what got when you get it back.

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Ok, I have now read your text. You get good into the parts Fair - Unfair and .Friends - Enemies Don't see the past - present so good, ( can you tell that please) but I do not know. I liked the text, it's good written english. You have some grammer mistakes, and some words typed wrong. Leave instead of left for example. There are some lines I would have rewritten but that's just the way I write. Would say you got good fantasy, but since it's taken from a movie, I can't say that, but I guess that your teacher does not know that.

If you want me to say more just let me know.

Tell me what got when you get it back.

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The story is rewritten a lot compared with the movie. The story from the movie is a bit more advanced, and more people are involved.

 

I'm glad you liked the text. Can i maybe get a B (or 5, as we say in Norway)? :whistle:

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I don't think we should be using this thread to discuss answers on exams. It had been much better to just make a new thread, leave this one to English chit-chat...

 

But anyway: I think the text is great, it has a good story, but there are some points7lines that could have been written in a different way. It had also been a bit nice if you could vary your language.

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But anyway: I think the text is great, it has a good story, but there are some points7lines that could have been written in a different way. It had also been a bit nice if you could vary your language.

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Thanks. I know what you are saying, and I am often writing in a norwegian-English way, and the only reason for that is that I haven't talked English so much.

 

If you understand.. :D

 

But, anyway, thanks for the compliments. :love:

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But anyway: I think the text is great, it has a good story, but there are some points7lines that could have been written in a different way. It had also been a bit nice if you could vary your language.

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Thanks. I know what you are saying, and I am often writing in a norwegian-English way, and the only reason for that is that I haven't talked English so much.

 

If you understand.. :D

 

But, anyway, thanks for the compliments. :love:

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hehe.I see..that's why you can use threads like this to practise your english. :thumbup:

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But anyway: I think the text is great, it has a good story, but there are some points7lines that could have been written in a different way. It had also been a bit nice if you could vary your language.

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Thanks. I know what you are saying, and I am often writing in a norwegian-English way, and the only reason for that is that I haven't talked English so much.

 

If you understand.. :D

 

But, anyway, thanks for the compliments. :love:

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hehe.I see..that's why you can use threads like this to practise your english. :thumbup:

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Hehe. I'm seeing forward to use this thread a lot in the time from now to the final exam in may / june.. :D

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