Ye Olde Pub (The English Pub)

[Laffe]

Hello...

Could someone help me to correct this sentence?

" I will do anything to make my hate, become into reality"

It needs some correction or some changes. But i don't know why.All i know is that , it doesn't sounds right. gaah, im tired.

[2ball_]

*snip*

"I will do anything to make my hate, become reality"

"I'll do anything to make my hate, become reality"

 

You coud put it like that. Or many other ways.

 

Edit:

"I'll do anything to make my hate, reality"

"I will do anything to make my hate, a reality"

Endret 11. desember 2009 av 2ball(s)

[Laffe]

Now, that sounds better!

THanks alot

[2ball_]

No problem. I love ot help when I can

 

THanks alot

My initials

Endret 11. desember 2009 av 2ball(s)

[ole_marius]

Ah, the memories... Great city. Just you or friends/family?

 

I couldn't disagree more. After 7 days in Winsor and 3 days in London I'll was nearly dreaming of Norwegian food cause the white bread they use is horrible! If you want to eat it you need to roast it. Not only that, they also eat chips and snack-bars for lunch

 

But London itself is not a pretty town, in my opinion it's like every other big million cities. The architecture on the buildings was boring, Even Trondheim has better architecture on theirs buildings.

But if you got a chance you'll should try the London eye, madame tussaud and a guided trip with an double decker. Tough, the substation in London is fantastic, on the first lock your eyes could pop out when you'll see the underground map, but you'll get used to it after a while and some unsuccessful trips...

[Gjest Slettet+981287349]

How's the Fish & Chips in Britain ?

[Laffe]

No problem. I love ot help when I can

 

THanks alot

My initials

 

It seemse that I need some more help with my english, heh.

It goes like this ""When I heard the rumors, my hate began. Now I want to find those names, and..... "

There is something with the line(I'm makeing a poem;p)

 

What I struggle here is.. "my hate began" and the word "those" Somehow, it dosen't sound correctely, right?

Those can refer to "de" in norwegian or is it these? *going back to school, haha*

[henbruas]

I don't think you can say that my hate began. It sounds kind of strange. The same with the other sentence. They should be rewritten (of course, with a poem, that can be difficult).

Endret 12. desember 2009 av Henrik B

[saladin waits for alice]

holy mackerel, I am starting to like this Jesus Fellow:

 

Jesus took two fish and five loaves of bread and, from that, multiplied enough to feed everybody. He illegally copied and distributed food for other people's enjoyment without permission. Jesus Christ: The Original Piracy Advocat!

 

(No offence, it is just a file sharing joke)

[2ball_]

No problem. I love ot help when I can

 

THanks alot

My initials

 

It seemse that I need some more help with my english, heh.

It goes like this ""When I heard the rumors, my hate began. Now I want to find those names, and..... "

"When I heard the rumors, hate filled me. Now I want to find those names, and..... "

 

It's kinda hard when it's taken out of context and I don't know what kind of poem it is. There usually are cirtan rules one has to follow when writing a poem. So when I rewright it, I risk(pardon my language) fucking it all up..

 

Edit: I liked the "pardon my language".. Since this is a norwegian forum

Endret 12. desember 2009 av 2ball(s)

[Wackee]

This thread cannot die

[Mikkel™]

Mayhaps, but i can! And i will if i dont get any food soon

[Wackee]

Order a pizza

[Mikkel™]

Order a pizza

that shit aint healthy Going to buy some groceries (grammer lol?) soon.

[Wackee]

No, not healthy... But DAMN good! It has been too long since i last ate a good pizza

[Mikkel™]

yeah me to... Only difference was that it was a healthy pizza that i made myself ^^

[ole_marius]

The only god pizza is the one our moms makes. Both Peppes and Dolly isn't worth the prize if you consider how it's taste and what you'll actually get for 200,-

 

I consider the fast food pizza more like a last solution food (nødmat?)

Endret 14. desember 2009 av ole_marius

[Mikkel™]

i would consider it as a last resort food ...

[Henrik C]

All right, to settle this without breaking the forum rules, what about renaming this to "The Pub - English discussion"?

That way we keep the old name, and we follow the rules. It's a win-win situation!

[2ball_]

All right, to settle this without breaking the forum rules, what about renaming this to "The Pub - English discussion"?

That way we keep the old name, and we follow the rules. It's a win-win situation!

I prefer the name we had.. emm.. some time ago: "The Pub - General discussion in English"

 

So long as the primary name of the thread stays "The Pub", I'm happy