Innlevering Engelsk--> imorgen (NY)

[MadsFN]

det er for å få noen ekstra ord....

 

lenger ned

Endret 20. september 2006 av MadsFN

[eldavid]

My Best Friend

This is a story about Prot

 

My best friend is a boy named Prot.

 

Prot is fourteen years old, and his birthday is Septhember 11th.

 

We are good friend's beacause we like almost the same things.

 

We play the computer, games, football Etc.

 

He got a big brother and an annyoing little sister that answers: "lol" to almost everything we say to her.

 

Prot got a funny puppy how always jump up and down, we havn't found out why yet.

 

I hope you liked my story about my best friend Prot

 

 

 

 

Rettet noen av feilene for deg.

 

Ps: Finn for Guds skyld på et litt bedre navn en Plot! Hva med noe så simpelt som George?

[MadsFN]

hehe, jeg måtte levere'n in idag ble som den var og Prot er fra k-pax noe som jeg bare skreiv når jeg satt i bilen å ventet

 

enda lenger ned

Endret 20. september 2006 av MadsFN

[Stian89]

100 ord din, banan? haha

 

Her er noe:

 

Helo i are named by my mother somting

 

I are has so much friends . it are so nicest to has friends.

 

Otto has a biggerer brothers and many smallest sister. i maby think he was very older ten me but i are no knows =) we often look at tiewcher and so many times said lololo rofl =)

 

Ble ikke så gale det vel. (Mods. spank me) 

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Good one!

[MadsFN]

Mr. Droll and hes Dog

 

It was a sad cloudy day. Mr. Droll was taking a walk with his dog in the park.

 

The park was in Liverpool a ugly old town.

 

It was Ugly because all the fabrics around.

 

Mr. Droll have been living in Liverpool all hes life, so have his dog Morphus.

 

Morphus is 2 years old.

 

A man with a well mannerd dog that carried hes umbrella walked by.

 

The man with the well mannered dog looked proud of his dog.

 

Now Mr.Droll wanted Morphus to carry hes umbrella.

 

Morphus understood, but after a while it started raining and Mr.Droll wanted hes umbrella

 

back. This Morphus didn't understand and didn't let go off it.

 

Finally when Mr. Droll got his umbrella it was toatally broken, so Mr. Droll and Morphus

 

went home with a broken umbrella.

 

 

 

kom med kommentarer tillegg og andre ting, noe du skal legge til kopier og forandre

[Prizefighter]

Et par smårettinger:

 

"...his dog"

"sad and cloudy"

"an ugly town"

"all the factories"

"...his life"

 

Der er endel feil til desverre. Vil også anbefale deg å omformulere endel setninger.