Innlevering Engelsk--> imorgen (NY)

[MadsFN]

Ja, har innlevering på Torsdag med tittelen "Mr droll and his dog"

Jeg går i 8.ene klasse så ikke gjør det FOR bra

 

hehe tusen takk

 

 

 

Den nye er litt nede på side 2

Endret 20. september 2006 av MadsFN

[Isbilen]

All work and no play makes MadsFN a dull boy.

All work and no play makes MadsFN a dull boy.

All work and no play makes MadsFN a dull boy.

All work and no play makes MadsFN a dull boy.

All work and no play makes MadsFN a dull boy.

All work and no play makes MadsFN a dull boy.

All work and no play makes MadsFN a dull boy.

All work and no play makes MadsFN a dull boy.

All work and no play makes MadsFN a dull boy.

All work and no play makes MadsFN a dull boy.

 

Værsågod, nøyaktig 100 ord. Er du heldig, er engelsklæreren filmfan.

[Hashtægg]

Ser ikke ut som om du bryr deg så mye, og siden du går i 8. så kan du likesågodt drite i å gjøre det

 

 

- unnskyld meg, men hvor vanskelig kan det være å skrive 100 ord om en ordentlig venn elrs?

[MadsFN]

veit ikke , orker bare ikke begynne. klarer ikke heller for den saks skyld..

 

 

 

Og isbil, nei hun er ikke det hu er ei feit hurpe som jeg har i 3fag

Endret 3. september 2006 av MadsFN

[Frohman]

Skriv litt om hva vennen din liker, om han har noen kjæledyr, og familien hans.

[DigitaL BlasteR]

Når ting haster så bruker du såklart Daria.no, propaganda.net etc. Gjorde det allerede før 8.klasse jeg . PS! Oppfordrer ikke til å skrive av/jukse, men å få inspirasjon=)

[MadsFN]

Her er resultatet etter en time's jobbing:

My Best Friend

This is a story about Prot

 

My best friend Prot.

 

Prot is fourteen years old, and his birthday is Septhember 11th.

 

We are good friend's beacause of we like almost all the same thing's.

 

We play the computer games, football Etc.

 

He got a big brother and a annyoing little sister that answers: "Lol" to almost evrything we say to her

 

 

Teacher i hope you liked my story about my best friend Prot

 

Men det er ALT for lite noen som kan legge til litt?

(Mellomrommene er for læreren abselutt skulle ha det)

Endret 4. september 2006 av MadsFN

[PerB]

He got a big brother and a annyoing little sister that answear's: "Lol" to almost evrything we say to her

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Nydelig at lillesøsterene answears.

[MadsFN]

ja nå haster det, kan ikke noen legge på et par setnginer? jeg finner ikke på noe, hodet er HELT tomt

[Isbilen]

Prot? Er ikke det han i K-Pax?

[MadsFN]

Joo, jeg fant bare på no..

[DigitaL BlasteR]

Her er resultatet etter en time's jobbing:

                                               My Best Friend

This is a story about Prot

 

My best friend Prot.

 

Prot is fourteen years old, and his birthday is Septhember 11th.

 

We are good friend's beacause of we like almost all the same thing's.

 

We play the computer games, football Etc.

 

He got a big brother and a annyoing little sister that answers: "Lol" to almost evrything we say to her

 

 

Teacher i hope you liked my story about my best friend Prot

 

Men det er ALT for lite noen som kan legge til litt?

(Mellomrommene er for læreren abselutt skulle ha det)

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Rettelse:

 

...because we like....

 

We play computer games, football etc.

 

He has/He's got....

 

Den siste setningen burde du etter min mening sløyfe. Eventuelt fjerne "Teacher" i begynnelsen av den.

Endret 4. september 2006 av DigitaL BlasteR

[Blacki]

kanskje jeg skulle tipse læreren din om denne tråden...

[MadsFN]

My Best Friend

This is a story about Prot

 

My best friend Prot.

 

Prot is fourteen years old, and his birthday is Septhember 11th.

 

We are good friend's because we like almost the same things

 

We play the computer games, football Etc.

 

He got a big brother and a annyoing little sister that answers: "Lol" to almost evrything we say to her

 

Prot got a funny puppy who always stands jumping up and down, we havn't found out why yet.

 

i hope you liked my story about my best friend Prot

 

sånn?

Endret 4. september 2006 av MadsFN

[Stian89]

Her er resultatet etter en time's jobbing:

                                              My Best Friend

This is a story about Prot

 

My best friend Prot.

 

Prot is fourteen years old, and his birthday is Septhember 11th.

 

We are good friend's beacause of we like almost all the same thing's.

 

We play the computer games, football Etc.

 

He got a big brother and a annyoing little sister that answers: "Lol" to almost evrything we say to her

 

 

Teacher i hope you liked my story about my best friend Prot

 

Men det er ALT for lite noen som kan legge til litt?

(Mellomrommene er for læreren abselutt skulle ha det)

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Du kødder, 1 time! Du klarte ikke spy ut noe bedre en dette? ...for ikke å snakke om hvor ufattelig mange skrivefeil du har.

[-Tommy]

Ta det rolig, han går jo bare i åttende

Endret 5. september 2006 av Silencer91

[Prizefighter]

100 ord din, banan? haha

 

Her er noe:

 

Helo i are named by my mother somting

 

I are has so much friends . it are so nicest to has friends.

 

Otto has a biggerer brothers and many smallest sister. i maby think he was very older ten me but i are no knows =) we often look at tiewcher and so many times said lololo rofl =)

 

Ble ikke så gale det vel. (Mods. spank me)

[Matias]

Hvis det funker å skrive om vennskap generelt (skrev det i niende eller tiende klasse, så sikkert en del feil):

 

“The essence of friendship is entireness, a total magnanimity and trust. It must not surmise or provide for infirmity. It treats its object as a god, that it might deify both.” Said the U.S philosopher Ralph Waldo Emerson once. Trust is one of the most important things in a friendship, because if you don’t have trust in your friend you cannot feel comfortable with him and you can’t tell him exactly what you feel. And if you don’t have trust in your friend you don’t feel that you can tell him secrets, afraid of him telling them to someone else.

 

Another important thing in a friendship is love. You have to love the person you are friend with, being there for him giving your support. If he recently broke up with his girlfriend and are feeling down, you are the one that shall be there to comfort him – giving him a helping hand. But, remember: loving is more important than being loved.

 

So what is the difference between love and friendship then? The question has a lot answers and you can’t say that any of them are right, but what I personally think is that love is something that you can do to anything, and friendship is restricted to something that has a mind and a soul. Friendship is also a thing I think you need to build up after time, and love is something you can experience faster than friendship.

 

Girls’ friendships are different than the boys’ because the girls like a lot more showing their friendship to each other then the boys’. They are more sensitive to each other and many of them use to like to give their friend a big hug or a little kiss on the chin. The boys’ – they are more in a “macho” kind of way and like hitting their shoulders and maybe wrestle a little bit. Also I think the girls’ like to talk some more personal stuff with each other. Like who they like and such.

 

An animal can also be your friend in a kind of way I think. For example I have a cat which I spend a lot time with and also have a lot of fun with. It has its own mind and a soul like we humans have, and they also has their own personality. So, why can’t an animal be your friend? After all we live on the same planet.

 

Then it’s the parents. I don’t think you can be friends with your parents. Parents are parents, and that’s the way it is. You cannot say: “my best friend is my mother” that gets to stupid. Of course that it only my oppinion, and maybe others will think of their parents as their friend, but as I said: I wouldn’t call it a friendship.

 

When it comes to how important friendship is to me, I would say that it’s very, very important to me, and without friends I think I would have a bad life. Why I say that is because it would have been so boring. Just think about it: Nobody to go to a movie with, nobody to go to the youth club with, nobody to go shop with or to talk to at school. I think it would have been horrible.

Endret 5. september 2006 av Matias

[Blacki]

100 ord din, banan? haha

 

Her er noe:

 

Helo i are named by my mother somting

 

I are has so much friends . it are so nicest to has friends.

 

Otto has a biggerer brothers and many smallest sister. i maby think he was very older ten me but i are no knows =) we often look at tiewcher and so many times said lololo rofl =)

 

Ble ikke så gale det vel. (Mods. spank me) 

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uff! det der var jo fullt av feil, og nesten ulesligt...

[DigitaL BlasteR]

My Best Friend

This  is a story about Prot

 

My best friend Prot.

 

Prot is fourteen years old, and his birthday is Septhember 11th.

 

We are good friend's because we like almost the same things

 

We play the computer  games, football Etc.

 

He got a big brother and a annyoing little sister that answers: "Lol" to almost evrything we say to her

 

Prot got a funny puppy who always stands jumping up and down, we havn't found out why yet.

 

i hope you liked my story about my best friend Prot

 

sånn?

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Du har kun rettet én feil? Sikker på at du har lest innlegget jeg skrev tidligere? . Og et tips: med mindre det er et dikt du skal levere inn, trenger du ikke å ta med en presentasjon og en avslutning av teksten. Vet at du går i 8.klasse, men likevel...