Kan dere se om det er noe feil i denne engelsken?

[Mr.SS]

The newly formed Empire has devastated the galaxy. The Jedi Knights are believed exterminated. People are being tyrannized, and the freedom of the fallen Republic is gone.

 

A disloyal Dark Jedi Master, who was a former agent of the Emperor, has broken the Sith Code. He and his minions have resurrected Darth Gladious, and are resurrecting Darth Plague. They have granted Darth Gladious with tremendous Sith power, with the help of a rare holocron. Therefore the Dark Jedi Master has broken the Sith hierarchy of only having a Master and an Apprentice...

 

Darth Gladious has obtained an attendant from his resuscitator who is also his new Master. On a wish from Darth Gladious himself, his new Lord has allowed him to kill all remaining Jedi.

 

Still stationed at their last bastion during the Clone Wars, Jedi Master Micah Giett and Sora Bulq are defending themselves from the assassinators of the Dark Jedi Master...

[Kjekssjokolade]

Ser ikke noen feil, tror jeg, men hva betyr/er "attendant" og "resuscitator"?

[Mr.SS]

Attendant er partner og resuscitator er en som gjenoppliver folk.

[Flygg]

kopierte bare hele teksten, og fikset det som trengte fiksing

 

The newly formed Empire has devastated the galaxy. The Jedi Knights are believed to be exterminated. People are being tyrannized, and the freedom of the fallen Republic is gone.

 

A disloyal Dark Jedi Master, who was a former agent of the Emperor, has broken the Sith Code. He and his minions have resurrected Darth Gladious, and are resurrecting Darth Plague. With the help of a rare holocron they have granted Darth Gladious with tremendous Sith power. Therefore the Dark Jedi Master has broken the Sith hierarchy of only having a Master and an Apprentice... (broken the sith hierarchy høres rart ut. kanskje rule eller noe sånt i stedet?)

 

Darth Gladious has obtained an attendant from his resuscitator who is also his new Master. As wished by Darth Gladious himself, his new Lord has allowed him to kill all remaining Jedi.

 

Still stationed at their last bastion during the Clone Wars, Jedi Master Micah Giett and Sora Bulq are defending themselves from the assassins of the Dark Jedi Master...

 

edit: er ikke ressurector et bedre ord enn resuscitator?

Endret 14. mars 2006 av kakk

[Mr.SS]

takk så mycke!