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Oppgaven er og skrive rundt 1 side om Trump. Denne oppgaven har veldig mye og si for karakteren så fint visst noen kan hjelpe meg. Rette på ord, omformulere setninger, oppbygging, noe som bør fjernes? Alt som kan gjøre oppgaven bedre Tusen takk!

 

Donald J. Trump

Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American real estate developer, television personality, businessman, and a candidate for the Republican nomination for the United States presidential election of 2016.

 

Trump was born on June 14, 1946 in New York City. He is the fourth of five children born to Mary Anne and the businessman Fred Trump. He has 5 children, Donald Trump jr, Ivanka Trump, Eric Trump, Tiffany Trump and Barron William Trump. Trump attended Fordham University in Bronx for two years, before transferring to the Wharton School of the University of Pennsylvania, because Wharton then had one of the few real estate studies departments in U.S. He graduated in 1968, with a Bachelor of Science degree in economics. After he graduated he started working in his father 's company. He started selling houses for the upper class in New York and Brooklyn. He was a talented seller. In 1971 Trump moved to Manhattan and got involved with some big building projects and he made a lot of money. The department of Justice accused him of corruption, but the judge found him innocent.

 

In 1971 he made the Trump Organization. After he made the Trump Organization the company has been one of the most successful companies in USA. All of the Trump properties have the name Trump in their titles, Trump Hollywood, Trump palace, Trump tower etc. Donald Trump has a net worth of 4.5 billion dollars. Donald Trump gives a lot of his money to charity.  Trump is also famous for hosting a reality television show titled “The Apprentice” and the catchphrase “you are fired”. The Apprentice is watched by millions of viewers weekly. He is also the executive producer of Miss USA, Miss Universe and Miss Teen USA.

 

Donald Trump developed a celebrity personality through his business dealings. A survey that NBC took shows that 98% of the American population had heard of him. He has always been famous for his estate development and his TV show, but when he announced that he wanted to run for president, he became more famous than ever. When it comes to Trump, you either like him, or dislike him. He is known for his racist comments about the Mexican and African people and he is talking really rudely about people he doesn’t like, such as Barack Obama and Hillary Clinton. He is often a total douchebag, here is an example of what he posted on Facebook: “I love the Mexican people, but Mexico is not our friend. They’re killing us at the border and they’re killing us on jobs and trade. FIGHT!” When other famous people commented on his Facebook post, Donald Trump told them to “fuck off”, because he was richer than them.

 

Trump has many other political viewpoints that most of the Americans are against, such as death penalty, a free market, poor view of women and really expensive hospitals and schools. Experts and other politicians are often criticizing him for being to conservative and that he only cares for the rich. Trump wants the taxes in USA to be as low as possible. This will make the rich people even richer and the poor even poorer. According to BBC 75% of everything he says is a lie. But the peoples who vote for him doesn’t seem to care.

 

Donald likes it luxuriously. He got a 100 million dollar yacht, a Lamborghini, a lot of houses, and a 120 million dollars private jet. He takes a lot of photos of his luxurious things so that everyone should know that he is rich. His company does a lot more than real estate development. It has vineyards, golf courses, real estate licensing, and skating rinks. Many developers pay Donald Trump to market their properties and be the public face for the projects. For that reason, Trump does not own many of the buildings that display his name.

The buildings are spread around the USA. The Trump Organization currently owns seven golf courses in the United States and he it’s building the Trump international gold club in the Caribbean Island. He had an enormous vineyard but it doesn’t belong to Trump anymore; he gave everything to his son Eric.

 

 

The day Donald Trump said he wanted to run for president, everyone looked at him as a joke. Now he got 45% of all the republican votes and will most likely be the candidate for the republicans in the electon in 2016. Even thought I really dislike his political views, I got to admit that he has personality. He says what he thinks and stands for it. I want more of the politicians to do that.

 

 

Sources:

 

http://www.trump.com/biography//

https://no.wikipedia.org/wiki/Donald_Trump

http://www.trump.com/

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Trump_Organization

http://uk.businessinsider.com/donald-trumps-homes-cars-planes-and-more-2015-6?r=US&IR=T

Endret 19. november 2015 av AdvokatenEndre

[Dolandyret]

 

Oppgaven er og skrive rundt 1 side om Trump. Denne oppgaven har veldig mye og si for karakteren så fint visst noen kan hjelpe meg. Rette på ord, omformulere setninger, oppbygging, noe som bør fjernes? Alt som kan gjøre oppgaven bedre Tusen takk!

 

Donald J. Trump

Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American real estate developer, television personality, businessman, and a candidate for the Republican nomination for the United States presidential election of 2016.

 

Trump was born on June 14, 1946 in New York City. He is the fourth of five children, son of Mary Anne and the businessman Fred Trump. Today he has got five children of his own, Donald Trump jr, Ivanka Trump, Eric Trump, Tiffany Trump and Barron William Trump. Trump attended Fordham University in Bronx for two years, before transferring to the Wharton School of the University of Pennsylvania, because Wharton  then had one of the few real estate study departments in U.S. He graduated in 1968, with a Bachelor of Science degree in economics. After he graduated he started working in his father 's company. He started selling houses for the upper class in New York and Brooklyn. He was a talented seller. In 1971 Trump moved to Manhattan and got involved in a couple of big building projects, which led to him making a lot of money. Later on the department of Justice accused him of corruption, but the judge found him innocent.

 

In 1971 he made the Trump Organization. Since the creation of the Trump Organization the company has been one of the most successful companies in USA. All of the Trump properties have the name Trump in their titles, e.g. Trump Hollywood, Trump palace and Trump tower. As of today Donald Trump has got a net worth of 4.5 billion dollars. Donald Trump gives a lot of his money to charity.  Trump is also famous for hosting a reality television show titled “The Apprentice” with the famous catchphrase “you are fired”. The Apprentice is watched by millions of viewers weekly. He is also the executive producer of Miss USA, Miss Universe and Miss Teen USA.

 

Donald Trump developed a celebrity personality through his business dealings. A survey that NBC took shows that 98% of the American population had heard of him. He has always been famous for his estate development and his TV show, but when he announced that he wanted to run for president, he became more famous than ever. When it comes to Trump, you either love him, or hate him. He is known for his racist comments about the Mexican and African people and he is talking really rudely about people he does not like, such as Barack Obama and Hillary Clinton. He is often a total douchebag(revurder), here is an example of what he posted on Facebook: “I love the Mexican people, but Mexico is not our friend. They’re killing us at the border and they’re killing us on jobs and trade. FIGHT!” When other famous people commented on his Facebook post, Donald Trump told them to “fuck off”, because he was richer than them.

 

Trump has many other political viewpoints that most of the(fjern) Americans are against, such as death penalty, a free market, poor view of women and really expensive hospitals and schools. Experts and other politicians are often criticizing him for being to conservative and that he only cares for the rich. Trump wants the taxes in USA to be as low as possible. This will make the rich people even richer and the poor even poorer. According to BBC 75% of everything he says is a lie. But the peoples who vote for him doesn’t seem to care.

 

Donald likes to live luxuriously. He has got a 100 million dollar yacht, a Lamborghini, a bunch of houses and a 120 million dollar private jet. He takes a lot of photos of his luxurious things so that he can show people how rich he is. >>(His company does a lot more than real estate development. It has vineyards, golf courses, real estate licensing, and skating rinks. Many developers pay Donald Trump to market their properties and be the public face for the projects. For that reason, Trump does not own many of the buildings that display his name.

The buildings are spread around the USA. The Trump Organization currently owns seven golf courses in the United States and he it’s building the Trump international gold club in the Caribbean Island. He had an enormous vineyard but it doesn’t belong to Trump anymore; he gave everything to his son Eric.)<<

Kommentar: Burde flyttes opp til der du snakker om the Trump Organization. Passer ikke inn her. 

 

 

The day Donald Trump said he wanted to run for president, everyone looked at him as a joke. Now he has got 45% of all the republican votes and will most likely be the candidate for the republicans in the electon in 2016. Even thought I really dislike his political views, I got to admit that he has personality. He says what he thinks and stands up for it. I would like to see more politicians do that as well.

 

 

Sources:

 

http://www.trump.com/biography//

https://no.wikipedia.org/wiki/Donald_Trump

http://www.trump.com/

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Trump_Organization

http://uk.businessinsider.com/donald-trumps-homes-cars-planes-and-more-2015-6?r=US&IR=T

 

 

Bare tatt litt pirk, orker ikke lese så fryktelig nøye. Er en del setninger og diverse som kunne krevd litt omskrivning, men iom. dette er på ungdomsskole-nivå kreves det ikke altfor mye. 

Om det er flere tilfeller av det: ikke bruk apostrofer i innleveringer. Det er veldig uformelt og burde unngås. Så istedenfor å skrive f.eks. doesn't, så burde du skrive does not.

 

Håper du skal levere på papir, ellers vil denne teksten vises her i forumet og du vil få tilnærmet lik 100% plagiat. 100% plagiat er stryk.

Endret 19. november 2015 av Dolandyret

[JussRelatertBot]

 

 

Oppgaven er og skrive rundt 1 side om Trump. Denne oppgaven har veldig mye og si for karakteren så fint visst noen kan hjelpe meg. Rette på ord, omformulere setninger, oppbygging, noe som bør fjernes? Alt som kan gjøre oppgaven bedre Tusen takk!

 

Donald J. Trump

Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American real estate developer, television personality, businessman, and a candidate for the Republican nomination for the United States presidential election of 2016.

 

Trump was born on June 14, 1946 in New York City. He is the fourth of five children, son of Mary Anne and the businessman Fred Trump. Today he has got five children of his own, Donald Trump jr, Ivanka Trump, Eric Trump, Tiffany Trump and Barron William Trump. Trump attended Fordham University in Bronx for two years, before transferring to the Wharton School of the University of Pennsylvania, because Wharton  then had one of the few real estate study departments in U.S. He graduated in 1968, with a Bachelor of Science degree in economics. After he graduated he started working in his father 's company. He started selling houses for the upper class in New York and Brooklyn. He was a talented seller. In 1971 Trump moved to Manhattan and got involved in a couple of big building projects, which led to him making a lot of money. Later on the department of Justice accused him of corruption, but the judge found him innocent.

 

In 1971 he made the Trump Organization. Since the creation of the Trump Organization the company has been one of the most successful companies in USA. All of the Trump properties have the name Trump in their titles, e.g. Trump Hollywood, Trump palace and Trump tower. As of today Donald Trump has got a net worth of 4.5 billion dollars. Donald Trump gives a lot of his money to charity.  Trump is also famous for hosting a reality television show titled “The Apprentice” with the famous catchphrase “you are fired”. The Apprentice is watched by millions of viewers weekly. He is also the executive producer of Miss USA, Miss Universe and Miss Teen USA.

 

Donald Trump developed a celebrity personality through his business dealings. A survey that NBC took shows that 98% of the American population had heard of him. He has always been famous for his estate development and his TV show, but when he announced that he wanted to run for president, he became more famous than ever. When it comes to Trump, you either love him, or hate him. He is known for his racist comments about the Mexican and African people and he is talking really rudely about people he does not like, such as Barack Obama and Hillary Clinton. He is often a total douchebag(revurder), here is an example of what he posted on Facebook: “I love the Mexican people, but Mexico is not our friend. They’re killing us at the border and they’re killing us on jobs and trade. FIGHT!” When other famous people commented on his Facebook post, Donald Trump told them to “fuck off”, because he was richer than them.

 

Trump has many other political viewpoints that most of the(fjern) Americans are against, such as death penalty, a free market, poor view of women and really expensive hospitals and schools. Experts and other politicians are often criticizing him for being to conservative and that he only cares for the rich. Trump wants the taxes in USA to be as low as possible. This will make the rich people even richer and the poor even poorer. According to BBC 75% of everything he says is a lie. But the peoples who vote for him doesn’t seem to care.

 

Donald likes to live luxuriously. He has got a 100 million dollar yacht, a Lamborghini, a bunch of houses and a 120 million dollar private jet. He takes a lot of photos of his luxurious things so that he can show people how rich he is. >>(His company does a lot more than real estate development. It has vineyards, golf courses, real estate licensing, and skating rinks. Many developers pay Donald Trump to market their properties and be the public face for the projects. For that reason, Trump does not own many of the buildings that display his name.

The buildings are spread around the USA. The Trump Organization currently owns seven golf courses in the United States and he it’s building the Trump international gold club in the Caribbean Island. He had an enormous vineyard but it doesn’t belong to Trump anymore; he gave everything to his son Eric.)<<

Kommentar: Burde flyttes opp til der du snakker om the Trump Organization. Passer ikke inn her. 

 

 

The day Donald Trump said he wanted to run for president, everyone looked at him as a joke. Now he has got 45% of all the republican votes and will most likely be the candidate for the republicans in the electon in 2016. Even thought I really dislike his political views, I got to admit that he has personality. He says what he thinks and stands up for it. I would like to see more politicians do that as well.

 

 

Sources:

 

http://www.trump.com/biography//

https://no.wikipedia.org/wiki/Donald_Trump

http://www.trump.com/

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Trump_Organization

http://uk.businessinsider.com/donald-trumps-homes-cars-planes-and-more-2015-6?r=US&IR=T

 

 

Bare tatt litt pirk, orker ikke lese så fryktelig nøye. Er en del setninger og diverse som kunne krevd litt omskrivning, men iom. dette er på ungdomsskole-nivå kreves det ikke altfor mye. 

Om det er flere tilfeller av det: ikke bruk apostrofer i innleveringer. Det er veldig uformelt og burde unngås. Så istedenfor å skrive f.eks. doesn't, så burde du skrive does not.

 

Håper du skal levere på papir, ellers vil denne teksten vises her i forumet og du vil få tilnærmet lik 100% plagiat. 100% plagiat er stryk.

 

Eg leverer på data, itslearning

[JussRelatertBot]

 

 

Oppgaven er og skrive rundt 1 side om Trump. Denne oppgaven har veldig mye og si for karakteren så fint visst noen kan hjelpe meg. Rette på ord, omformulere setninger, oppbygging, noe som bør fjernes? Alt som kan gjøre oppgaven bedre Tusen takk!

 

Donald J. Trump

Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American real estate developer, television personality, businessman, and a candidate for the Republican nomination for the United States presidential election of 2016.

 

Trump was born on June 14, 1946 in New York City. He is the fourth of five children, son of Mary Anne and the businessman Fred Trump. Today he has got five children of his own, Donald Trump jr, Ivanka Trump, Eric Trump, Tiffany Trump and Barron William Trump. Trump attended Fordham University in Bronx for two years, before transferring to the Wharton School of the University of Pennsylvania, because Wharton  then had one of the few real estate study departments in U.S. He graduated in 1968, with a Bachelor of Science degree in economics. After he graduated he started working in his father 's company. He started selling houses for the upper class in New York and Brooklyn. He was a talented seller. In 1971 Trump moved to Manhattan and got involved in a couple of big building projects, which led to him making a lot of money. Later on the department of Justice accused him of corruption, but the judge found him innocent.

 

In 1971 he made the Trump Organization. Since the creation of the Trump Organization the company has been one of the most successful companies in USA. All of the Trump properties have the name Trump in their titles, e.g. Trump Hollywood, Trump palace and Trump tower. As of today Donald Trump has got a net worth of 4.5 billion dollars. Donald Trump gives a lot of his money to charity.  Trump is also famous for hosting a reality television show titled “The Apprentice” with the famous catchphrase “you are fired”. The Apprentice is watched by millions of viewers weekly. He is also the executive producer of Miss USA, Miss Universe and Miss Teen USA.

 

Donald Trump developed a celebrity personality through his business dealings. A survey that NBC took shows that 98% of the American population had heard of him. He has always been famous for his estate development and his TV show, but when he announced that he wanted to run for president, he became more famous than ever. When it comes to Trump, you either love him, or hate him. He is known for his racist comments about the Mexican and African people and he is talking really rudely about people he does not like, such as Barack Obama and Hillary Clinton. He is often a total douchebag(revurder), here is an example of what he posted on Facebook: “I love the Mexican people, but Mexico is not our friend. They’re killing us at the border and they’re killing us on jobs and trade. FIGHT!” When other famous people commented on his Facebook post, Donald Trump told them to “fuck off”, because he was richer than them.

 

Trump has many other political viewpoints that most of the(fjern) Americans are against, such as death penalty, a free market, poor view of women and really expensive hospitals and schools. Experts and other politicians are often criticizing him for being to conservative and that he only cares for the rich. Trump wants the taxes in USA to be as low as possible. This will make the rich people even richer and the poor even poorer. According to BBC 75% of everything he says is a lie. But the peoples who vote for him doesn’t seem to care.

 

Donald likes to live luxuriously. He has got a 100 million dollar yacht, a Lamborghini, a bunch of houses and a 120 million dollar private jet. He takes a lot of photos of his luxurious things so that he can show people how rich he is. >>(His company does a lot more than real estate development. It has vineyards, golf courses, real estate licensing, and skating rinks. Many developers pay Donald Trump to market their properties and be the public face for the projects. For that reason, Trump does not own many of the buildings that display his name.

The buildings are spread around the USA. The Trump Organization currently owns seven golf courses in the United States and he it’s building the Trump international gold club in the Caribbean Island. He had an enormous vineyard but it doesn’t belong to Trump anymore; he gave everything to his son Eric.)<<

Kommentar: Burde flyttes opp til der du snakker om the Trump Organization. Passer ikke inn her. 

 

 

The day Donald Trump said he wanted to run for president, everyone looked at him as a joke. Now he has got 45% of all the republican votes and will most likely be the candidate for the republicans in the electon in 2016. Even thought I really dislike his political views, I got to admit that he has personality. He says what he thinks and stands up for it. I would like to see more politicians do that as well.

 

 

Sources:

 

http://www.trump.com/biography//

https://no.wikipedia.org/wiki/Donald_Trump

http://www.trump.com/

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Trump_Organization

http://uk.businessinsider.com/donald-trumps-homes-cars-planes-and-more-2015-6?r=US&IR=T

 

 

Bare tatt litt pirk, orker ikke lese så fryktelig nøye. Er en del setninger og diverse som kunne krevd litt omskrivning, men iom. dette er på ungdomsskole-nivå kreves det ikke altfor mye. 

Om det er flere tilfeller av det: ikke bruk apostrofer i innleveringer. Det er veldig uformelt og burde unngås. Så istedenfor å skrive f.eks. doesn't, så burde du skrive does not.

 

Håper du skal levere på papir, ellers vil denne teksten vises her i forumet og du vil få tilnærmet lik 100% plagiat. 100% plagiat er stryk.

 

Tusen takk

[Aiven]

Om det er flere tilfeller av det: ikke bruk apostrofer i innleveringer. Det er veldig uformelt og burde unngås. Så istedenfor å skrive f.eks. doesn't, så burde du skrive does not.

Jeg undrer meg over denne påstanden, såvidt jeg vet er dette er standard engelsk i både USA og UK.

Endret 20. november 2015 av Aiven

[Dolandyret]

 

Om det er flere tilfeller av det: ikke bruk apostrofer i innleveringer. Det er veldig uformelt og burde unngås. Så istedenfor å skrive f.eks. doesn't, så burde du skrive does not.

Jeg undrer meg over denne påstanden, såvidt jeg vet er dette er standard engelsk i både USA og UK.

Det er standard engelsk ja, men det er en veldig uformell måte å skrive på. På samme måte som at du heller skriver f.eks. hello istedenfor hi etc. i mer formelle sammebhenger. Med mindre oppgaven sier noe annet, skal den alltid betraktes som formell. Endret 20. november 2015 av Dolandyret