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Donald J. Trump

Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American real estate developer, television personality, businessman, and candidate for President of the United States in 2016.

 

Trump was born on June 14, 1946 in New York City. He is the fourth of five children born to Mary Anne and the businessman Fred Trump. Trump attended Fordham University in the Bronx for two years, before transferring to the Wharton School of the University of Pennsylvania, because Wharton then had one of the few real estate studies departments in U.S. He graduated in 1968, with a Bachelor of Science degree in economy.

After he graduated he started working for his father company. He started selling houses for the upper class in New York and Brooklyn. In 1971 Trump moved to Manhattan and got involved with some big building projects and he made a lot of money. The department of Justice accused him for corruption, but the judge found him innocent. In 1971 he made the Trump Organization. After he made the Trump Organization the company has been one of the most successful companies in USA. All of the Trump properties have the name Trump in their titles, Trump Hollywood, Trump palace, Trump tower etc. Donald Trump has a net worth of 4.5 billion dollars. Trump hosted a reality television show titled “The Apprentice” and the catchphrase “you are fired”. The Apprentice is watched by millions of viewers weekly. He is also the executive producer of Miss USA, Miss Universe and Miss Teen USA. Donald Trump developed a celebrity personality through his business dealings. Donald Trump gives a lot of his money to charity. A survey that NBC took shows that 98% of the American population had heard about him. He has always been famous for his estate developing and his TV show, but when he published that he wanted to go for president, he became more famous than ever. He is the candidate for the party republicans in the USA. When it comes to Trump, you either like him, or hate him. He is known for his racist comments about the Mexican and African people and he is talking really rude about people he doesn’t like, such as Barack Obama and Hillary Clinton. Really often he can be a total douchebag, here is an example of what he posted on Facebook: “I love the Mexican people, but Mexico is not our friend. They’re killing us at the border and they’re killing us on jobs and trade. FIGHT!”

When other famous people commented this Donald Trump told them to “fuck off”, because he was richer than them. Donald likes it luxuriously. He got a 100 million dollar yacht, a Lamborghini, Many houses, And a 120 million dollars private jet. He is taking a lot of photos of his luxuriously things so everyone should know that he is rich. His company it’s doing a lot more than real estate developing. They have vineyards, golf courses, real estate licensing, and skating rink. But they get most of the income from real estate developing and that’s what they are most famous for.

 

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Trump was born on June 14, 1946 in New York City. He is the fourth of five children born to Mary Anne and the businessman Fred Trump. Trump attended Fordham University in the Bronx for two years, before transferring to the Wharton School of the University of Pennsylvania, because Wharton then had one of the few real estate studies departments in the U.S. He graduated in 1968, with a Bachelor of Science degree in economics (hvis du har oversatt fra norsk, kan "økonomi" oversettes på flere måter, for eksempel til "business", så kontroller om dette er riktig).

After he graduated he started working in his father's company. He started selling houses for the upper class in New York and Brooklyn. In 1971 Trump moved to Manhattan and got involved with some big building projects and he made a lot of money. The department of Justice accused him of corruption, but the judge found him innocent. In 1971 he made the Trump Organization. After he made the Trump Organization the company has been one of the most successful companies in USA. All of the Trump properties have the name Trump in their titles, Trump Hollywood, Trump palace, Trump tower etc. Donald Trump has a net worth of 4.5 billion dollars. Trump hosted a reality television show titled “The Apprentice” and the catchphrase “you are fired”. The Apprentice is watched by millions of viewers weekly. He is also the executive producer of Miss USA, Miss Universe and Miss Teen USA. Donald Trump developed a celebrity personality through his business dealings. Donald Trump gives a lot of his money to charity. A survey that NBC took shows that 98% of the American population had heard of him. He has always been famous for his real(?) estate development and his TV show, but when he announced that he wanted to run for president, he became more famous than ever. He is the candidate for the party republicans in the USA (som sagt er dette feil, så formuler en ny setning). When it comes to Trump, you either like him, or hate him. He is known for his racist comments about the Mexican and African people and he is talking really rudely (adverb, ikke adjektiv) about people he doesn’t like, such as Barack Obama and Hillary Clinton. Really often he can be a total douchebag, here is an example of what he posted on Facebook: “I love the Mexican people, but Mexico is not our friend. They’re killing us at the border and they’re killing us on jobs and trade. FIGHT!”

When other famous people commented on this Donald Trump told them to “fuck off”, because he was richer than them. Donald likes it luxuriously. He got a 100 million dollar yacht, a Lamborghini, many houses, And a 120 million dollars private jet. He takes a lot of photos of his luxurious (adjektiv, ikke adverb)  things so that everyone should know that he is rich. His company does a lot more than real estate development. It has vineyards, golf courses, real estate licensing, and skating rinks. But it gets most of its revenue from real estate development and that’s what it is most famous for.

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Det er en faktafeil i den første setningen. Skriv heller "...and a candidate for the Republican nomination for the United States presidential election of 2016.

 

Ellers:

 

Trump was born on June 14, 1946 in New York City. He is the fourth of five children born to Mary Anne and the businessman Fred Trump. Trump attended Fordham University in the Bronx for two years, before transferring to the Wharton School of the University of Pennsylvania, because Wharton then had one of the few real estate studies departments in the U.S. He graduated in 1968, with a Bachelor of Science degree in economics (hvis du har oversatt fra norsk, kan "økonomi" oversettes på flere måter, for eksempel til "business", så kontroller om dette er riktig).

After he graduated he started working in his father's company. He started selling houses for the upper class in New York and Brooklyn. In 1971 Trump moved to Manhattan and got involved with some big building projects and he made a lot of money. The department of Justice accused him of corruption, but the judge found him innocent. In 1971 he made the Trump Organization. After he made the Trump Organization the company has been one of the most successful companies in USA. All of the Trump properties have the name Trump in their titles, Trump Hollywood, Trump palace, Trump tower etc. Donald Trump has a net worth of 4.5 billion dollars. Trump hosted a reality television show titled “The Apprentice” and the catchphrase “you are fired”. The Apprentice is watched by millions of viewers weekly. He is also the executive producer of Miss USA, Miss Universe and Miss Teen USA. Donald Trump developed a celebrity personality through his business dealings. Donald Trump gives a lot of his money to charity. A survey that NBC took shows that 98% of the American population had heard of him. He has always been famous for his real(?) estate development and his TV show, but when he announced that he wanted to run for president, he became more famous than ever. He is the candidate for the party republicans in the USA (som sagt er dette feil, så formuler en ny setning). When it comes to Trump, you either like him, or hate him. He is known for his racist comments about the Mexican and African people and he is talking really rudely (adverb, ikke adjektiv) about people he doesn’t like, such as Barack Obama and Hillary Clinton. Really often he can be a total douchebag, here is an example of what he posted on Facebook: “I love the Mexican people, but Mexico is not our friend. They’re killing us at the border and they’re killing us on jobs and trade. FIGHT!”

When other famous people commented on this Donald Trump told them to “fuck off”, because he was richer than them. Donald likes it luxuriously. He got a 100 million dollar yacht, a Lamborghini, many houses, And a 120 million dollars private jet. He takes a lot of photos of his luxurious (adjektiv, ikke adverb)  things so that everyone should know that he is rich. His company does a lot more than real estate development. It has vineyards, golf courses, real estate licensing, and skating rinks. But it gets most of its revenue from real estate development and that’s what it is most famous for.

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