[Løst] Retting av engelsk tekst

[Ungjenta]

Hei! Jeg skal levere inn et kort sammendrag en en fremføring på skolen, og jeg lurte på om noen hadde lyst til å lese gjennom det, og komme med retinger/forbedringer til teksten? Hadde hjulpet masse, og jeg hadde blitt kjempeglad

 

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Polly and Natalie live in a small house. Natalie is a sporty girl who likes to keep fit. Polly is quite the opposite of Polly. Polly is lazy and do almost nothing but sleeping. Natalie tries to take Polly out to train, but Polly is not exactly positive. Eventually Natalie gives up.

 

Natalie begins to nag at Polly to go shopping. After much hassle, Polly decides to go to the shopping center with Polly. At the shopping center Natalie sees a new sports store, and she is in heaven. Polly however, are not exactly super happy. Natalie sees some amazing Nike shoes, and falls completely in love. Polly is provided, and they start a little quarrel, before it ends with them leaving the store, and are on the way home. Then they meet Brooke and Ivy, two old friends of them.

 

Brooke and Ivy are also on the shopping center. Brooke has already picked out several clothes, while poor Ivy only carry bags for Brooke. Brooke is not afraid to spend money, and as soon as she sees a purse she loves, she buys it. Ivy tries to talk Brooke from buying the expensive purse, but as usual she don’t listens to what Ivy says. She buys the yellow purse, and Ivy gets even more to carry. She tries to show Brooke that she starts getting a little tired of carrying her bags, but Brooke doesn’t take the hint as usual. Suddenly Brooke brakes a nail, and it becomes a completely cries in the store. Ivy finally gets the revenge she always has dreamed of.

[Gavekort]

Polly and Natalie live in a small house. Natalie is a sporty girl who likes to keep fit. Polly is quite the opposite of Polly (Natalie). Polly is lazy and does almost nothing but to sleep sleeping (Eksempel: "Gavekort is really lazy, he does nothing but to sleep all day") . Natalie tries to take Polly out to train (Exercise), but Polly is not exactly positive (Ville heller brukt engaged/enthusiastic, positive har ikke helt samme betydning på Engelsk brukt som et verb). Eventually Natalie gives up.

 

Natalie begins to nag at Polly to go shopping. After much hassle, Polly decides to go to the shopping center with Polly. At the shopping center Natalie sees a new sports store (outlet er bedre), and she is in heaven. Polly however, are is (They are [...], she is [...]) not exactly super happy. Natalie sees some amazing Nike shoes, and falls completely in love (Ville heller brukt "And completely falls in love). Polly is provided(Provided?), and they start a little quarrel, before it ends with them leaving the store, and are on the way home. Then they meet ("Meet" er "å møte", "Met" er "møtte") Brooke and Ivy, two old friends of them.

 

Brooke and Ivy are also on the shopping center. Brooke has already picked out several clothes, while poor Ivy only carry bags for Brooke. Brooke is not afraid to spend money, and as soon as she sees a purse she loves, she buys it. Ivy tries to talk Brooke from buying the expensive purse, but as usual she don’t (doesn't) listens to what Ivy says. She buys the yellow purse, and Ivy gets even more to carry. She tries to show Brooke that she starts getting a little tired of carrying her bags, but Brooke doesn’t take the hint as usual. Suddenly Brooke breakes (breaks) a nail, and it becomes a completely cries in the store (Gir ikke mening). Ivy finally gets the revenge she always has dreamed of.

Endret 10. februar 2014 av Gavekort

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[Ungjenta]

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