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[liljegren]

This is the most important part of my life. Its now I have the fundation, the fundation for how the rest of my life will be. Now I am going to search for a high school and I hope my wishes will come true. After having nine and a half year at elementary school, I will have another three years at high shcool.

But I havent finished the three years at Storetveit yet so it`s still a job to do! I suppose that the next 4 months might be quite hard. A lot of tests and offcourse, the most important one, the exam. I hope there will be 4 nice months to come, and I am looking forward to the summer hollidays.

I think it`s very difficult to choose a school, I had to make a very difficult descision. It will decide my life for many years to come, wich makes it so difficult. I have done some searchs, and I hope some of the comes true. But I will have to work hard the next 4 months!

Very soon I had to find me a job and a house. Were will I live what will I work with. It’s a lot of oppurtunities in a big city like Bergen, and that’s makes it even more difficult. My toughts about my first years is nice. To get a job, work with you like, you make descisions. With out any experiences about having a job, it will reqiure a lot of me, complete every single day at job, the first months and maybe years, but nothing to fear about!

 

It is the job that will raise my earnings and therefore I had to work har also at the High school. But the work methods at high school might be a bit more independent. I think that will help me, getting more experience until I will start to work.

 

 

 

 

 

Rett den rakskt!!!!

[Karina Hulesangerhule]

foundation*

 

nei vetta faen

Endret 22. februar 2011 av Karina Hulesangerhule

[Karina Hulesangerhule]

jo, foundation.

 

FOUNDATION **

[nosferatus]

hard* i siste strofe. Setningen kunne også omformuleres litt etter min mening

 

Hvilken klasse går du i ? Kunne vært satt inn en del kommaer også.

[Hanske]

This is the most important part of my life. Its - apostrof - now I have the fundation - rettet av katarina - , the fundation for how the rest of my life will be. Now I am going to search for a high school - jeg ville skrevet "apply to" - and I hope my wishes will come true. After having nine and a half year at elementary school, I will have another three years at high shcool.

But I havent - apostrof - finished the three years at Storetveit yet so it`s - there's - still a job to do! - jeg ville skrevet "some work to be done" eller noe lignende - I suppose that - kan strykes - the next 4 months might - "will" - be quite hard. A lot of tests and offcourse - of course - , the most important one, the exam. I hope there will be 4 - four - nice months to come, and I am looking forward to the summer hollidays.

I think it`s very difficult to choose a school, I had to make a very difficult descision - decision - . It will decide my life for many years to come, wich - which - makes it so difficult. I have done some searchs - research - , and I hope some of the - it - comes true. But I will have to work hard the next 4 - four - months!

Very soon I had to find me a job and a house. Were will I live what will I work with. - hæ? It’s - there's - a lot of oppurtunities in a big city like Bergen - Bergen big city? Yeah, right!, and that’s - that - makes it even more difficult. My toughts about my first years is - are - nice. - hele den setningen var dårlig. To get a job, work with - that - you like, you make descisions - decisions -. With out - without - any experiences about having a job, it will reqiure a lot of me, complete every single day at job, the first months and maybe years, but nothing to fear about! - Jeg ville prøvd å omformulere hele setningen.

 

It is the job that will raise my earnings - omformuler - and therefore I had to work har - hard also - bytt til "too", og sett ordet etter high school - at the High school. - liten forbokstav - But the work methods at high school might be a bit more independent. I think that - it - will help me, getting more experience until I will - stryk det ordet - start to work. - skriv "start working".

 

 

 

 

 

Rett den rakskt!!!!

 

Ja, det gikk jo greit. Jeg stusset litt over at du plutselig endret verbtid. Du gikk fra nåtid til fortid, for å bruke den barnslige betegnelsen.

 

Ellers var det en del å rette på. Noe skjønte jeg ikke, og annet bør du omformulere.

 

Jeg tror uansett du har driti deg ut. Læreren din kjører vel plagiatkontroll? I så fall dukker denne teksten opp fort.

Endret 22. februar 2011 av Hanske

[Karina Hulesangerhule]

Jeg heter ikke katarina

[Hanske]

Jeg heter ikke katarina

 

Unnskyld.

[Karina Hulesangerhule]

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