Engelsk innlevering.

[liljegren]

Task 7, a good decision.

Barack Obama signs the new health reform:

 

Barack Obama was born 4 August 1961 and became the 44th president in the USA in January 2009. He became the first African American president in the USA. He represents the Democratic Party. After Barack Obama had been president, less then a year he awarded the Nobel peace price. He I married with the lawyer Michelle Obama who is born in Robinson, and they have two daughters together.

 

I have chosen to write about Obama. I think he is a special man because he was the first African American president in the USA, and only that itself is pretty difficult to achieve. I chose to write about Obama when he signed the new health care law in America. The reason for why I chose to write about this is because this was so important for the USA inhabitants, at least the poorest. An another reason for why I chose to write about this is because there have been so many presidents before Obama that have failed or they have not wanted to sign the health reform and only Obama made it.

 

My reason for why this person is someone to look up to is because he always thinks everything is possible. He showed he whole world that everything is possible when he became the first American African president. It is one of the greatest achievements made from a human being, I think.

 

In March 2010 Obama finally signed the new health reform. The health reform should be introduced gradually over the next eight years. The reform will cover some of the health expenses for around 32 million Americans without health insurance. The insurance would also be much more cheaper for many more Americans. It will also eventually bee mandatory for all Americans to sign insurance, as opposed to now. To day, tens of million people don’t have the insurance because they can’t afford it.

 

I thought this was a very good decision by Obama because there were so many people in the USA that don’t have enough money to afford it.

 

 

 

 

 

Hjelp meg med å rette denne teksten.

Oppgaven er slik: at man skal skrive om en person som gjorde et godt valg i en vanskelig situsjon.

 

teksten skulle hvere på minst 200 or, min er på 353

[liljegren]

Den nye versjonen:

 

 

Task 7, a good decision.

Barack Obama signs the new health reform:

 

Barack Obama was born 4th of August 1961. He became the 44th president in the USA in January 2009 and the first African American president in the USA. He represents the Democratic Party. Less then a year after Barack Obama had been president, he awarded the Nobel peace price. He is married with the lawyer Michelle Obama who is born in Robinson. They have two daughters together.

 

I have chosen to write about Obama because he is a special man. He was the first African American president in the USA. And that itself is pretty difficult to achieve. He also signed the new health reform in America. This was important for the USA inhabitants, at least for the poorest. There have been so many presidents before Obama that have failed or they have not wanted to sign the health reform, only Obama made it.

 

My reason for why this person is someone to look up to is because he always thinks everything is possible. He showed the whole world that everything is possible when he became the first African American president. It is one of the greatest achievements made of a human being, I think. For 50 years ago this wouldn’t been possible due to the fact of racism rules in the USA.

 

In March 2010 Obama finally signed the new health reform. The health reform should be introduced gradually over the next eight years. The reform will cover some of the health expenses for around 32 million Americans without health insurance. The insurance would also be much more cheaper for many more Americans. It will also eventually bee mandatory for all Americans to sign this insurance, as opposed to today. To day, about ten million people don’t have the insurance because they can’t afford it, today. This is something Obama will change with the health reform.

 

I thought this was a very good decision by Obama because there were so many people in the USA that don’t have enough money to afford it.

[Læremester]

På hvilket nivå er denne oppgaven gitt? Barneskole, ungdomsskole, videregående skole?

[liljegren]

Ungdomskole, i engelsk fordypnig i 10-ende klasse

[ahpadt]

Skal vi se.

 

Barack Obama was born the 4th of August in 1961. He became the 44th president in the USA in January 2009 and the first African American president in the USA, representing the Democratic Party. Less than a year after Barack Obama had become president, he was awarded the Nobel peace price. He is married with the lawyer Michelle Obama. Together they have two daughters, Malia Ann and Natasha.

 

I have chosen to write about Obama because he is a very unique man. He was the first African American president in the USA. That itself is an extraordinary achievement. He also recently signed the new health reform in America. This was important for the USA inhabitants, at least for the poorest. There have been many presidents before Obama that have failed or have not wanted to sign a health reform, only Obama managed to do this.

 

My reason for why this person is someone to look up to is because he is very forward thinking. He showed the whole world that everything is possible when he became the first African American president. I think this is one of the greatest achievements made by any human being. 50 years ago this wouldn’t have been possible due to the fact of racism rules in the USA.

 

In March 2010 Obama finally signed the new health reform. The health reform will be introduced gradually over the next eight years. This reform will cover some of the health expenses for around 32 million Americans without health insurance. For many Americans this will also lead to a much cheaper insurance. Eventually it will become mandatory for all Americans to sign this insurance, as opposed to today. To day, about ten million people don’t have an insurance because they can’t afford it. This is among one of the many things that will be changed with the new health reform.

 

I think this was both a great and brave decision by Obama, due to the fact that there are millions of people in the USA who can't afford a health insurance.

 

Kjapp omskriving 02:08 på natta. Er sikkert noen feil jeg også har laget, men syntes det ser bra ut nå.

 

Du repeterer deg litt ofte. Jeg har endret på litt av det.

Endret 21. januar 2011 av ahpadt