Kortfilm - hjelp!

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Hei folkens!

Driver og jobber med et manus til en kortfilm nå, som skal være på rundt tre minutter. Må være ferdig ila. et par dager, så snar hjelp blir jeg veldig takknemlig for!

 

Ext. House, night/early morning

BOY, 19/20, is outside a house, sneaking around towards the house wall. He is wearing all black and a black mask that covers his face, holding a flash light. He moves quietly. Suddenly he stop, takes something up from his pocket, looking at it. He puts the item back in his pocket and walks towards the door. He checks if it’s open – it is.

 

Int. house, night/early morning

The boy walks inside, moves quietly up the stairs/into the living room. He finds a jacket, he checks the pocket. There is a wallet with money in it. Does something that makes a sound (e.g. kicks a chair or hits the flashlight in a door), the HOUSE OWNER comes down the stairs/into the living room, holding a flash light.

 

HOUSE OWNER

Who’s there?

 

The house owner lights down the stairs/over the living room. The boy runs out the door.

 

Ext. house, early morning

The boy runs towards his bike. The house owner comes out to the front door in his pyjamas, shouting after him. We see the boy biking. (Shots from car: in front of the bike and behind the bike, LS + CU).

 

Hva skjer nå? Tenkte at det må bygge på noe som har noe med å gjøre at han drar tingen opp av lommen sin før han bryter seg inn...

 

Vær så snill og hjelp