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What’s A Good Life for You?

 

Say to yourself, what’s a good life for me? Many boys like to say, much money, and a boobs model who a wife, and live in the biggest house in the world. If you ask a girl, I think they like to say, I like to live who Barbie live. People like to say this word. But I think a good life is a family who proteck me, they be there for me when I wont it. I can get a girlfriend, maybe a day get children with her. Help other peoples who need help. I think the many peoples want to say that. But if I ask people, what’s a good life? They think personal thing. Like the newest Mobil telephone, new football shoes for 2000 dollar. Everybody won’t the newest staff of all. I think if you are poor, you think a good life, is to have a family who protect you, but in Norway when many have much of money they just talk about the new Ipod you get to Christmas.

 

In Christmas you can see more the different better on peoples who is rich and poor. Many Families in Norway have big Christmas tree, Christmas lights with many different colours over the whole house with many big present. For example country in Africa who celebrates Christmas, maybe not have a Christmas three. Maybe they not have big present, they just wish nice kids and good friends.

 

I ask my friends Abdul who grown up in poor In Israel and my boss’s son, Morten from Norway. What’s a good life?

Abdul said: A good life for me is to talk with my mom and dad every day. See my wife and son ever day. See my son grow up. Be there for my son all the time. Have a good time with my friends. For example meet the boys and take a beer together and just talk about everything.

That is a good life for me.

Morten said: A good life for me is getting a big house with my 3 girlfriends and I take over dad’s management and sell it, then I am the richest people in the world. Then I have the best life in the world.

 

I think Abdul have much better life then Morten ever get. Abdul is not rich but he enjoys the life. He loves peoples with whole heart. Morten get what ever he won’t, because he does that he never been very, very, very happy. But Abdul will be happy for a little pictures his child have drawing.

If you want to live nice life, I think is a good idea to see the different. When you se how bad peoples have it other place. It’s hard for you to not help them. If you give them little Coca Cola they want to be so happy. If you want to help, its enough to just give a little present, I sure they are happier then I never have se any of my friends.

 

her er den andre

 

The Long travell

Karen is 16 year old, she lived with her mother and she loves her mom very much. My mom real name is Julie. Karen have never met her dad, He went long from Karen and her mother when Karen was born. When Karen asked her mother about him, she not answers. It was summer holyday. All Karen friends were on a summer camp, but not Karen. That’s because they was so poor because she not have a real father.

 

 

Karen sat in the garden. “If I had a real dad who don’t just run a way because he get a daughter. If my dad doesn’t have done that I had been in the summer camp now, right now.” Think Karen, she was little angry now. Sudden she think,” I will find my dad, and he going to give money to go on the summer camp every year from now. She went to her mother and said,

” Where live dad? I know you know it.” Said Karen, she was very angry now. Karen’s mom just went to the kitchen.

“Mom, I know you know it” Said Karen, she was extremely angry now.

“Okay, I tell you. He lives on the big house on the end of the big field,” Said Karen’s mom. “That’s not so long, I can go there on only 5 days. If you drive me it take one our.” Said Karen.

“No, you can not visit your dad.” Karen’s mom was very angry now.

 

 

When the clock was 00:00, Karen went done to the kitchen. She made a big lunch pack. That was the start to find her dad. She went over the big field. After she had gone in some minutes, she doesn’t felt hers so angry anymore. She just go and she go. After 2 ours she stopped and she was so tired. So she went to sleep.

Suddenly somebody woke Karen. “Who are you?” ask Karen.

“I’ am Gabriella. I work her. Who are you?” said Gabriella.

“I’ am Karen, I look at the man who live on the end of field.” Said Karen

“That’s very far from her, if you go in and trough the wood, that’s will go 3 day faster” said Gabriella.

“Thanks,” said Karen.

Karen began to go again. Karen looked at the fantastic heaven, she saw the sun and the moon on the same time. When she go, she thinks “When I can be with my friends on the summer camp, I going to eat the biggest Lion ice ever. I’ am going to get the coolest boyfriend, who I kiss all the time.” When Karen thinks this, she comes to the wood. After Karen had go 5 ours I the wood she stops. She fined a fine place to sleep on. When she lay on the hill, she suddenly heard something. “That’s was surly nothing” think Karen. She heard that again. Suddenly the came a squirrel, but the squirrel just run straight past him.

 

The day after she had went in 3 ours she heard a something again. Suddenly the came a big bear, then was brown and went on 2 feet’s. The bear went to Karen. Karen heard something else no. The came a man, he had ha knife. He took the knife, and he try to kill the bear, but he lose the knife. Karen ran to the knife, picket up. She ran to the bear, but the bear scribble her in hers face. The man picks up the knife and kills the bear. The man ran to Karen, and asked her;

“Are you okay?”

“Yeah” said Karen

The man ran to his bag, and he pick up some water and paper. He ran back to Karen and poured the water on hers sore.

“What your name?” ask the man

“I’ am Karen. What your name?”

“I’ am Arthur, I live on the end of field,”

“That’s my father,” think Karen

“Have you had ha girlfriend with the name Julie?” ask Karen

“Yes, she live one our form her if we drive” Said Arthur

“You are my dad,” said Karen happy

“Are you sure about that?” said Arthur

“Yes, I’ am sure about that.” Said Karen

“I can drive you home, and we for look there.” Said Arthur

Arthur and Karen went to they was 100 m form his house and stop there. He went home to get the car. Karen going to wait there (she wait on the picture).

 

When Arthur and Karen come home, Karen told her mom at Arthur save her from a bar. Arthur and Karen had been friends again. They decide to be together again. Next year Karen went to the summer camp, she buy the biggest lion ice ever and she get a boyfriend

[Bruktbilen]

Begge var strengt talt elendig, ingen klarte å formulere setningene riktig og masse skrivefeil.

[iverdensterke]

Begge var strengt talt elendig, ingen klarte å formulere setningene riktig og masse skrivefeil.

men hvem er best?

[Bango]

det heter hvilken, kas. ikke hvem

 

Edit, leif

Endret 28. november 2008 av Sir Tojo

[iverdensterke]

det heter hvilken, kas. ikke hvem

 

Edit, leif

 

det var ikke spørsmålet vårt

[Bruktbilen]

Den første historien er den korteste, så den vinner...

Endret 28. november 2008 av Bruktbilen

[iverdensterke]

Den første historien er den korteste, så den vinner...

:-)

[iverdensterke]

Den første historien er den korteste, så den vinner...

:-)

 

 

:-)

[iverdensterke]

Den første historien er den korteste, så den vinner...

:-)

 

 

:-)

 

hvilken av dem har færrest gramatisk feil?( den siste måtte være så lang)

Endret 28. november 2008 av iverdensterke

[L4r5]

Den korteste. Rett og slett fordi den er kortest.

[iverdensterke]

Hvem er den beste? ikke si at den ene er bedre fordi den er kortere

[Bango]

Det heter hvilken!

[TCRW]

Det heter hvilken!

Ja, nettopp. Hører at mange rundt meg spør "hvem" side o.l. Det er riv ruskende galt, og det verste er at flertallet i klassen min nettopp sier det.